Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts
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Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Story: Destination Destroyed

It was the year 2076. Claire along with the people of Struny Island were fighting to keep their town in one piece. It was the middle of a civil war, on an island off the coast of Europe. The island was leading in the growth of a special fruit called strunberries. Strunberrys were used to heal wounds of any type. The island was controlled by President Hoffman.

Hoffman was secretly working on storing all the fruit away and killing each plant off as he went. He wanted to be in control of the island and the medical help it kept. Nellie was his faithful servant who kept this secret from everyone who lived on the island. President Hoffman was suffering from a sickness the strunberries couldn't cure. The president passed away leaving the people of the island in shock of what was to come.

Sean was the Vice President who thought he should fill in while Nellie was the President’s personal representative, who believed that she should take control of the island. This civil war had been in the making for many years. The island was divided in half, one half following their fearless leader Nellie, the other half following their leader Sean.

Sean wanted to keep peace but believed that their main concern should be for the environment. He believed that they killed off the produce with the pollution that was caused by machines and vehicles. Nellie wanted to be the best in every category no matter what the cost was. She wanted this to be the island with the highest exportation rate.

Sean told all the people of the island, “Nellie is a liar! I don’t have the hard evidence yet, but she has been helping President Hoffman keep secrets from us for many years.”

When Nellie heard this she went after Sean saying, “Sean is lying! He just wants to take over this island so he can get rid of all the machine shops and vehicles. Sean only cares about the environment, not the people who live on this island!”

This disagreement caused a civil war within the island. The civil war had been going on for a while when it finally made its way to the town that Claire lived in which was Superville.

Claire really didn't want her beautiful city destroyed. The people of Superville loved their city so much and it was filled with so much beautiful art and architecture. It would be a shame to demolish such a beautiful place. The people of Superville tried everything to detour the war from coming to their city. After their final attempt failed, Claire ran to the mountains and watched her beloved city become a pile of ash.

After the war moved on into another city Claire went back to the city to see if anything was left. She was crushed to find that the whole city was gone. There were bits and pieces of furniture and pictures everywhere she looked. When she found a couch that was still partly intact she sat there trying to calm herself down. She started sobbing and just couldn't stop. After a few minutes she had eventually cried herself into a deep sleep. Her sleep lasted a few years.

Finally, when she woke up she was strapped down to a metal table. There were I.V.'s in her arms and beeping machines all around her. She was scared and didn't know what was going on. Suddenly the doors opened and a robot nurse came in with a tray of supplies. The robot noticed that she was awake and hit the button on the side of her bed.

Her room was quickly filled with robots. When Claire talked to them, trying to figure out where she was and what was happening, the robots never responded. Finally, a bigger robot came into her room and noise filled the room. Claire noticed that the arm of the robot said BOB. The noise coming from the robots was a noise that Claire had never heard before. She tried to ask BOB what was going on and where she was when BOB answered, "We are the new inhabitants of Earth. You have been asleep for 25 years. There are no more left of your kind, and we are trying to figure out why that is. Do you know what happened to the rest of your species?"

This news frightened Claire. Looking down and shaking her head she said, "I have no clue what you are talking about. The last I knew we were in the middle of a Civil War. Why can't I leave here?"

The BOB responded, "You are here so we can monitor you. You can't leave until we figure out what happened to the rest of your species and why they disappeared."

Their conversation finished and the robots left her room. Every day after that day Claire refused to eat or communicate with anyone because she felt so out of place. One day she finally asked BOB what his name stood for.

BOB replied, "Biomedical Orthopedic Body."

BOB then went on to tell her that he was a robot that was controlled by something other than himself. Someone sent him orders of what to do and say. He was pretty much like any other robot body or droid. She asked who created him and BOB went on to tell her that the information she was asking for was classified. They went on and talked for a few hours until Claire was worn out. When Claire was trying to fall asleep, she couldn’t stop thinking about what was in her future. She worried about what will come next in her journey with BOB.





Author's note: I used the story of The Sleep of One Hundred Years. This story is about Onias who saw Jerusalem destroyed and then fell asleep for 100 years. The story of Onias is over 2000 years old and has been passed down since first century B.C.E. Onias fell asleep after his city was destroyed by a fire. When he awoke he knew no one and the place he was at seemed unsettling to him. He felt out of place because things had changed in the years he had been asleep. After he had gone into town he found out everything he knew was gone. He found some of his relatives that still lived near the town. When he talked to them he realized he could never live here because this is not the time and place he belonged in. I got the idea of a civil war from a series that I read a couple years ago called Divergent. I used Divergent and Hunger Games to lay a ground plot for the way I formatted this story. The major changes I made were changing the setting to be in a dystopia and making it in the future. My changes were based off the impression I got the first time reading through this story. I chose the image to represent BOB. I did this because BOB is Claire's only link to anything left after her sleep.


Bibliography:
Gertrude Landa, The Sleep of One Hundred Years 

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The body of the Future.
Photo by: TexelGirl-Stock

Reading: Jewish Fairy Tales, Part B

After reading the stories I came up with about three ideas I could use for my storytelling post. The first idea was from the story of The Sleep of One Hundred Years. Instead of this being a story about a man who sleeps one hundred years I was thinking I could make it about a teenage girl. After a Civil war her city is destroyed. She finds a bed that is still intact to take a nap, she wakes up in a stage place with a bunch of IV's running into her arm. She then realizes that her nurses are robot. The second story idea I came up with goes with the story of the King for Three Days. My idea was during a combat fight a girl was taken captive and a man tries to save her harming the people that captured her one at a time. The last story idea I came up with was from the story Fairy Frog. For this story idea I think I would have a grandma leave an heirloom of her dog to her granddaughter, her wishes is that the granddaughter raises the dog and takes good care of her and it will protect her. In a few years when the granddaughter is living on her own someone tries to break into her house and the dog protects her.
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The Great Protector.
Link: Wikipedia
Bibliography 
King for Three Days , Gertrude Landa 
The Rabbi's bogey-Man, Gertrude Landa
The Fairy Frog, Gertrude Landa 


Reading Notes: Jewish Fairy Tales

This week I chose to read the Jewish Fairy tale books, the first story I read was The Giant of the Flood. When reading this story I came up with a few different ideas that I could use for story telling this week. You could keep the fact that Noah didn't want his son around and bring into into current times and instead of it being Noah and Og it would be a girl who doesn't fit her mom's imagination and style of what a girl should look like and how she should act. This happens a lot in this day and time so she could be banished for being a "tomboy" or getting a tattoo. The next story I read was The Beggar King, this to me reminded me of a "Freaky Friday" type story. I think a good plot line would be a Freaky Friday occurrence but instead of a mom and daughter maybe a bully and a kid that stands up to the bullies. The last story idea I got after reading these stories was from  The Quarrel of the Cat and Dog, to me this would be like a middle school girl drama option where the girls make a pact not to date a boy and then one starts flirting with the boy when the boy is flirting with the other girl. The other two stories I really didn't come up with any ideas that I thought would be a good story line, I will still think on them and if I do I will comment on this post.

Ething by Hendrik Hondius


Bibliography:
The Giant of the Flood, Gertrude Landa  
The Beggar King, Gertrude Landa
The Water-Babe, Gertrude Landa 
From Shepherd-Boy to King, Gertrude Landa
The Magic Palace , Gertrude Landa